This story may or may not be my favourite LNHB story, yet I don't even know why. I suppose, as it may or may not be my favourite, I should be writing an in-depth review but I really can't. And honestly, if I ponder and reflect on this story for too long, I can't seem to decide whether I hate it or love it. For me, it's utterly baffling, slightly hypnotising and sometimes, just plain strange. Reading this seems to have torn away my calm and left me floundering about and totally unbalanced. And still, I'm not even sure what it is about this story. This -- urgh. *flips table* I give up on reviewing this.
One of the things I can
say about this is that sometimes I found the sentences messy and the middle of the end scene dragged on.
Rating: maybe 4.5. Confused as hell.